tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.comments2012-11-03T12:51:01.365-07:00The Poetry of MeFelicity Elsaesserhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04838710938213419861noreply@blogger.comBlogger68125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-12957298590121523762012-11-03T12:51:01.365-07:002012-11-03T12:51:01.365-07:00I love this, takes one effortlessly through the em...I love this, takes one effortlessly through the emotions you were having.<br />It sounds like song lyrics to me :)<br /><br />It'll be great to see your comments on my poetry! :)<br />ghadablogs.blogspot.comGhada Qureshihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11838127140729298185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-32613011389160171472012-08-09T13:02:04.295-07:002012-08-09T13:02:04.295-07:00Charming poem well written :)Charming poem well written :)Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-79332213830398496192012-08-09T13:00:01.139-07:002012-08-09T13:00:01.139-07:00I like this poem Felicity it is very emotive I lik...I like this poem Felicity it is very emotive I like the last line 'any hell is better than your heaven'Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-63717118642026870722012-06-14T22:20:00.349-07:002012-06-14T22:20:00.349-07:00Well said, strong, powerful.
"instead i love...Well said, strong, powerful.<br /><br />"instead i love what i decide<br /> and do as i am satisfied" <br /><br />Nice piece. Good to see you writing more.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-78835948949464772122012-03-28T23:04:58.337-07:002012-03-28T23:04:58.337-07:00I adore the title so much emotion capsized in such...I adore the title so much emotion capsized in such simple words, you should explore Haiku's in doing so myself, I found the word limit strangely liberating.<br /><br />Oh yes by the way; I have chosen your blog for the Liebster Award to see the details copy and paste the http below<br /><br />http://annaaainafairytalee.blogspot.com/2012/03/liebster-blog-awardee.htmlannaaainafairytalee.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12003568950859855554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-56949012267146467142012-02-15T03:31:24.845-08:002012-02-15T03:31:24.845-08:00I really liked this poem, so much so that I read i...I really liked this poem, so much so that I read it three times. It connects to me, if that makes sense at all. I am a new follower of yours and I would love it if you stopped by and checked out my poetry, told me what you thought of it.<br />http://annaaainafairytalee.blogspot.com/annaaainafairytalee.https://www.blogger.com/profile/12003568950859855554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-78813878319946423372011-11-30T15:46:26.915-08:002011-11-30T15:46:26.915-08:00hey there. this is good. check mine out? :)hey there. this is good. check mine out? :)HeartTheoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04508560956898415702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-28358159263215767712011-08-25T23:11:49.926-07:002011-08-25T23:11:49.926-07:00Felicity! Your words here are a memory.Felicity! Your words here are a memory.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-42791152196356775852011-07-31T20:04:16.162-07:002011-07-31T20:04:16.162-07:00Oh so good! Your attempt succeeded.Oh so good! Your attempt succeeded.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-78071588355955269352011-07-17T11:51:28.102-07:002011-07-17T11:51:28.102-07:00Lovely poem!Lovely poem!Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-36516719040658278652011-06-26T03:24:47.223-07:002011-06-26T03:24:47.223-07:00Ha! Very good! I enjoyed this!Ha! Very good! I enjoyed this!The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-69090827361346838692011-06-26T03:20:54.259-07:002011-06-26T03:20:54.259-07:00"I wonder what brings this feeling about me,
..."I wonder what brings this feeling about me,<br />How in the forefront of a storm I sit more proudly"<br /><br />Excellent soul-searching question and boldly written. I encourage your friend to continue his search.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-31700794511482425572011-06-05T03:30:05.923-07:002011-06-05T03:30:05.923-07:00There is a typo: "pocess", I think you m...There is a typo: "pocess", I think you meant "possess". <br /><br />I like your line "Each burden I bestow" and the "torcherus cry" but I get a bit lost in "War is only contrasted by harm" however the curiosity of the piece reflects well the close.<br /><br />Good introduction. :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-60169657201921081612011-06-03T14:43:18.782-07:002011-06-03T14:43:18.782-07:00Thank you both soo much, and all of my other fans,...Thank you both soo much, and all of my other fans, you have been my will to keep writing, honestly!!Felicity Elsaesserhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04838710938213419861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-453541140313241252011-06-02T03:21:35.323-07:002011-06-02T03:21:35.323-07:00It seems you write very well while your guardian r...It seems you write very well while your guardian rests. :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-80263980331285948892011-06-01T05:12:48.287-07:002011-06-01T05:12:48.287-07:00Wow, This is absolutely fabulous, you have come a ...Wow, This is absolutely fabulous, you have come a long way! Well done:)Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-34373275547498374782011-05-11T17:00:59.728-07:002011-05-11T17:00:59.728-07:00Inspirational and awakener, Felicity. Let Love be ...Inspirational and awakener, Felicity. Let Love be loved and defused. Let selfishness fused. Thank You.Ifinder Ifindi https://www.blogger.com/profile/03621334866239360699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-30009544492289742422011-05-11T13:54:28.865-07:002011-05-11T13:54:28.865-07:00I love this one - I seem to have missed quite a fe...I love this one - I seem to have missed quite a few of you poems.Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-28155507445110144092011-05-11T13:50:51.264-07:002011-05-11T13:50:51.264-07:00To have someone that I can talk to when I know the...To have someone that I can talk to when I know they're not listening and be okay with it.. That is an incredible line ... sad but beautiful poem.Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-29788572182826231912011-05-11T13:43:49.456-07:002011-05-11T13:43:49.456-07:00We are selfish in love and we do carry 'sins&#...We are selfish in love and we do carry 'sins' but then forgiveness is so much part of love isn't it? A lovely little poem Felicity!Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-53255764690619994222011-04-17T09:41:58.495-07:002011-04-17T09:41:58.495-07:00dream on, dream strangely, dreams do come true.
...dream on, dream strangely, dreams do come true. <br /><br />I like this one.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-35445119358227564912011-04-17T04:46:31.700-07:002011-04-17T04:46:31.700-07:00"life will be released eventually", so t..."life will be released eventually", so true. great depth of insight Felicity. :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-29301866418400347742011-04-09T00:20:22.067-07:002011-04-09T00:20:22.067-07:00I like this Felicity.
Well done.I like this Felicity.<br /><br />Well done.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-83681655586790561152011-04-01T13:57:09.927-07:002011-04-01T13:57:09.927-07:00I really liked this poem. I often try to trace a l...I really liked this poem. I often try to trace a line from star to star to find the constellations but alas I find nothing at all but diamonds on velvet!Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1118071156643648738.post-61810894334309362922011-04-01T13:52:31.182-07:002011-04-01T13:52:31.182-07:00The bottom, unseeable as it was, the most threaten...The bottom, unseeable as it was, the most threatening thing I witnessed ... perhaps the most outstanding and beautiful words in this piece that give the reader insight into the intimate emotions of the writer. Well done!Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05059957468044601830noreply@blogger.com