you took me to your
place called heaven
i was given my wings
and precious things
and precious things
this bright new land you showed my
there i always longed to be
but later on
suddenly you were gone
no where to be found
I was put back on the ground
no more clouds to sail through
and skys no longer blue
furiously my world had changed
over flowing now with rage
so now i drown in your pitiful sorrow
not knowing if ill see tomorrow
i gave you a chance
and made you choose
not even thinking i could loose
but in the end i lost
and my whole world, it did cost
so please now just let me go
deep
deep
down below
because any hell
is better than you heaven.
6.14.12
2 comments:
I like this poem Felicity it is very emotive I like the last line 'any hell is better than your heaven'
I love this, takes one effortlessly through the emotions you were having.
It sounds like song lyrics to me :)
It'll be great to see your comments on my poetry! :)
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